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Short but sweet.

Very nicely done. I am curious, how exactly did you animate this?

TheMillz responds:

As the review above mentioned, the technique is called "rotoscoping". It involves filming live action, then animating over it. Think that Keanu Reeves movie where he's the drug cop guy.

nice

I like the style you are using, however I'm assuming you are drawing with a mouse. Buy a tablet those things work wonders.

Exevos responds:

Yep I used to have one I just cant find it anymore :D

Not Bad

Nice FBF. I would recommend working less with stick figures, simply because of originality. The animated drawing/filling could be smoothed out a little bit. Also the ending is a little abrupt.

gOdiZ responds:

ty, yeah im trying to switch over to FB now.

sorry about the ending ^^

wow

Not bad, the preloader worked. I was mildly entertained throught the animation, but the "betrayal" at the end made me laugh quite a bit, good job.

Enlightener57 responds:

the betrayal thing was something i thought of while eating dinner one night lol so i just stuck with it cuz i thought it was hilarious

not bad

I like it, but why was it so small? lol Btw where did u get the music? It was a good touch.

SickManProductions responds:

I bought magix music maker 11 :) its a great bit of software.

Lolerskates (<-- wtf o_O)

Ha! Nice animation, I didn't really get the ending but it was random and funny. Nice detail with simple characters. Good job

Dimanti-San responds:

Don't know if I really get the ending myself, but thx for reviewing ^^.

frame rate

you need way more frames, i made the same mistake with my 1st flash attampts. what frame rate are you working with? its way to short. i recommend improving the special effects, add more detail, and add a background. Good choice of music though, and pretty good for a 1st.

ultrakiller666 responds:

with around 10 fps, I thought it would be nice makng it not too fast, and not too slow, and there are several things that I can't really find to make it better, but still, I'm just a beginner, so, I don't really care right now, the next one will be better

few tips.

ok i have some advice. As far as the animating it was ok, but it was a little sloppy. props for FBF though. also ironically randomness in order to work must have structure. i kno it sounds like an oximoron but randomness must be used at the right time and place. also there appeared to be now flow, the various animated objects just didnt seem to come together.

paddy-ryan responds:

ill try

lol not bad

the animation was pretty smooth, and the concept made me smile. lol pigs. i would recommend you add some plot bring him somewhere! its a great idea. a pig on a rocket lmao. go places with this give him a goal, give him a quest an arch-enemy! give him a story!

Diwi responds:

Yeah well, i heard that song and decided to animate something to it.
I'm kinda surprised there are so many people liking the idea.

I think i will add these things you've suggested when I'm lazy and bored enough to animate again.

Anyway, thanks alot!

cool

that was cool, but sound! it needs either sound or music! very creative...for some reason it reminds me of a phone commercial (?!) lol. but good work!

diaz123 responds:

lol. yeh the sound dusnt work

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Mount Ida College

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