The music was a tad bit loud making it difficult to hear the dialouge at some points. Otherwise, fantastic! Excellent animation.
Its been awhile
It's always good to see some decent animation in the portal. It's animation like this, that has time and effort put into it, that keeps me coming back. Great job! Good character design, simple but very effective SFX, and good plot! The artwork itself is great too. Keep up the good work!
This honostly makes me laugh every single time. The irony at the very begining had me in tears. Fantastic animating, and spontaneous aerial collision scenes always make me laugh...for hours somtimes. Overall great job!
Sound. I cannot emphasize enough on sound.
I know lol
It was ok, props for clay animation. You need way more frames, smooth out your animation. More camera angles maybe?
Have you ever truied to make a minute long claymation, not only is it hard to get alot of camera angles in a claymation already, it's hard to fit alot in one minute.
Just some thoughts
Add more detail to your animating. Not the artwork but the actual animating, you need more frames. When the character is walking if you do not want to animate the legs at least animate the arms. A simple back and forth motion will do, you can even tween that. Also review your work before you submit and make sure the dimensions are correct, you don't want your work to by cut off by white void! Haha. My suggestion to you would to be to use movie clips more often. You could use them to give the fire on Ghost Rider's head life for example. Good luck on your future submissions!
thank you for the helpful freview. i really appreciate it
Not too shabby! Not often do we see animal walk/run cycles around here. Very nice job, the legs are a tiny bit off sync compared to a live action cycle but great job none the less!
Excellent job, very good animation and character design. Definitely one of the best storylines I have seen in awhile. My two points of criticism would be on the end of the story and on your walk cycles. The walk cycles from behind seem a bit unrealistic, it is not that the character is a shadow but rather that there is no movement in the legs. Perhaps even just moving the character up and down a bit would be enough to give the appearence of a foward walk cycle. As far as the story, I think the scene where there is an error in the computer system a "A few hours earlier" subtitle or somthing along those lines would be nice to help clarify what exactly happened. Overall excellent animation! Keep up the good work!
Yep, I've noticed that as well.
Thanks for watching! :D
Not bad at all, nice run/walk cycles but I noticed the main character ice skates a little bit right at the begining. Nice design, simple but stylish. Good job.
I'm going to pass this because you get an A+ in WTF!
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