wow
That was ten times better. good job lol
wow
That was ten times better. good job lol
Front page?
Ok the flash wasnt bad, but i honestly dont think that its front page material. the art wasnt really impressive, and the concept was mediocre in my opinion, but you did make me laugh a couple times. The art contest i found rather humorous lol.
Better
waaay better then the 1st, absolutely hysterical lmao. Good job! nice effects too.
LMFAO!
Wow! This is by far one of the funniest animations i have ever seen. Absolutley ridiculess! I love it! Good job, keep up the good work!
Sweet
Great animating. most of the voice acting was good. The art just amazes me great job. And nice touch of Ninja Gaiden music lol.
frame rate
you need way more frames, i made the same mistake with my 1st flash attampts. what frame rate are you working with? its way to short. i recommend improving the special effects, add more detail, and add a background. Good choice of music though, and pretty good for a 1st.
with around 10 fps, I thought it would be nice makng it not too fast, and not too slow, and there are several things that I can't really find to make it better, but still, I'm just a beginner, so, I don't really care right now, the next one will be better
few tips.
ok i have some advice. As far as the animating it was ok, but it was a little sloppy. props for FBF though. also ironically randomness in order to work must have structure. i kno it sounds like an oximoron but randomness must be used at the right time and place. also there appeared to be now flow, the various animated objects just didnt seem to come together.
ill try
lol not bad
the animation was pretty smooth, and the concept made me smile. lol pigs. i would recommend you add some plot bring him somewhere! its a great idea. a pig on a rocket lmao. go places with this give him a goal, give him a quest an arch-enemy! give him a story!
Yeah well, i heard that song and decided to animate something to it.
I'm kinda surprised there are so many people liking the idea.
I think i will add these things you've suggested when I'm lazy and bored enough to animate again.
Anyway, thanks alot!
absolutley awesome
that was amazing. i myself hope to animate that well somday lol. very good job! very abstract, i dont think anything needed work...so perfect review! yay!
more
well that was pretty cool. it needs to be longer though, great style, also add a play button. if you made a longer version it would kick arse! literally!
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